How do you make your email stand out enough for an editor to open it instead of just hitting delete? As a publisher, here are my tips for how to make a press release appeal to me.
Email is the best way to communicate with journalists, but that’s no guarantee of success. If your email arrives on deadline day or at a time when there is also a massive influx of other emails, you may miss out.
Having managed a website for several years, I receive many press releases each day. Being a busy person I delete everything that does not look like it’s worth my time. Perhaps 95% of all press releases I receive do not get opened. I scan the list of subject lines and mass delete everything that does not get past my speed reading filter.
If you want to get your story published by a journalist, you have to get your email past this filter. You could call it the ‘I’m too busy for that to be a priority’ filter.
In order to demonstrate how I choose what’s worth reading, I have selected some emails randomly from my inbox. The good ones are those that I have not deleted – emails where I felt compelled to at least read the email to see if it was useful. The bad ones are those I quickly deleted, with my reasons for each.
Press releases with bad email subject lines
- Orangegrove foster care leads the way
- Grow your child’s imagination
- Sick workers trudge into work regardless
- Drayton Manor gets ready for 2013 season
These titles are closed statements. Simple facts without any invitation to find out more. The press release from Orangegrove reads like an advertisement – ‘We’re great’. The second headline feels like an order, not a piece of information.
The third one came out at a time when many workers are off sick and there is snow on the ground, but do I really need to get excited about the fact that sick people still make it to work? I already know that. Where’s the story my readers would care about?
The fourth press release is poor quality for Drayton Manor, which usually has more inviting stories such as a new meerkat birth or a new ride. Just saying you are ready to open for the season without attaching a hook is uninteresting.
- Joyeux Anniversaire Dr Guy Bérard, developer of AIT sound therapy
French? Really? For an English journalist who writes in English for an English audience? Straight in to Deleted Items.
- New rules kick in for teen machine
This is like the first bunch – it posts a fact, but this headline does indicate that the press release offers some information. The problem is, it assumes I know what ‘teen machine’ means. It could mean anything and I’m too busy to open the email to find out.
- Duvet sales rocket as Britain braced for 30 hours of snow
That’s nice to know. I know this email will read like an advertisement so I don’t even need to open it.
- AMERICA’S TOP TOY LAUNCHES IN THE UK AT TOY FAIR
So? What is it? I can’t be bothered to open the email to find out. The title could tell me what the toy is and giving me a juicy fact about it.
- EDITH BOWMAN RETURNS TO HOST BBC THREE RED CARPET SHOW FOR THE EE BRITISH ACADEMYFILM AWARDS
Subject lines all in capital letters… Grrrr! PR people who do this deserve to have their emails printed out, ripped up and then posted back to them. I WON’T PAY MORE ATTENTION JUST BECAUSE YOU SHOUT. Also, the subject line is too long for my preview screen so the ‘Academy Film Awards’ bit didn’t even get spotted.
- THE CLEVER APPLICATION OF SCIENCE TO NATURE: WHATEVER THE DIET, INCLUDING THE 5:2 INTERMITTENT FASTING DIET, LOSE WEIGHT MORE QUICKLY – AND LESS ONEROUSLY – THAN DIETING ALONE
More shouting, and this subject line is sooooo loooong, I fell asleep before getting halfway though. This headline reminds me of that classic SEO joke: ‘How many SEO experts does it take to change a lightbulb, lightbulbs, light bulb, how to change a lightbulb…’
Press releases with good email subject lines
- News Release: Children Narrate Favourite Story To Four-Legged Friend To Boost Literacy And Self Confidence
The main problem with the above subject line is that my email program truncated it at ‘Leg’ but there was enough here to tell me this is a press release about children reading stories to dogs. That’s intriguing and has the makings of a fun story.
- PRESS RELEASE: No soggy bottoms on Red Nose Day
Red Nose Day means comedy, ‘soggy bottoms’ sounds rude. This one deserves at least a look.
- The Most Embarrassing Best Kept Health Secret is now in the (UK)
Seeing ‘embarrassing’ and ‘health’ in the same sentence suggests there may be something here worth sharing on social media, which would make it an attractive story to run. Of course, to find out I have to read the press release.
- UK’s Most Comfortable Bra Wins Product of the Year in Women’s Clothing Category
I would have cut off this title at ‘year’ because it was too long for my preview window anyway. While this is clearly promoting one product, many readers would want to know what the most comfortable bra is so, again, only by reading the press release will I find out.
- Perfect Pubes for Valentine’s Day
Who would not want to find out more about this?
Summary – quick tips for emailing press releases
- Remember, the subject line doesn’t need to tell the story, it needs to tell the journalist why they should open the email.
- DO NOT SHOUT.
- Keep the subject line reasonably short, putting the key point at the beginning.
- Use trigger words that encourage interest – eg, embarrassing, funniest, sexiest.
- Follow up the email with another email or phone call. There’s no harm in chasing journalists – they generally ignore things only because they are too busy, not because they hate you. Unless, of course, they do hate you.